This is an unofficial blog hop challenge makeup post for #MFRW.
This is officially the Week 2 assignment – Sorry Editor! My Common Writing Mistakes.
For my first book – Red Wine & Roses, my editor had just graduated from Oxford and was between jobs. Since then she has landed a prestigious position with Elsevier and has been dealing with some major health issues between herself and her boyfriend.
Enter GRACE! My editor is Grace Augustine, author of the Acorn Hills Series. Do any of you believe in divine connections? The day I met Grace seemed to be one of those connections. We were attending Romance Rendezvous in Cedar Falls Iowa. I gambled on being able to arrive in plenty of time by driving there and not staying over. It was close, but we arrived in time. It was very close! Since then, we’ve become good friends.
Friends aside, Grace is a tough editor. I would expect nothing less! I wonder how much it would cost to have some muffins delivered to her each morning . . . . it might soften the task. If you find yourself in need of an editor, aside from myself because I do have slots available to edit next month and through the summer, I can strongly recommend Grace over at edits with a touch of grace.
Anyway, moving on to my mistakes. There are times when I really hate these prompts and this is one of them. Why is it necessary to air my dirty laundry??? Seriously, this is why we have editors because we all have common mistakes. *SIGH*
Misspelled words: Please let me clarify, I know how to spell, but my fingers have a different plan when I’m typing.
- Becasue =because
The use of semicolons – it’s like someone spilled a bucket full of them all over my computer files.
Switching tense – one of my pet peeves as an author and as an editor. Yet, I do it myself.
Sentence fragments. We don’t think in complete sentences, but when writing, we have to at least know the rules before breaking them. If the author is adding a bit for emphasis, sometimes it’s acceptable to use a sentence fragment but not when you are in the middle of a descriptive narrative. Recently, I sent the first part of Roxy to Grace, she commented: this sentence makes no sense! NO, it didn’t because I didn’t complete it. I left off the subject of the sentence.
Recently, I sent the first part of Roxy to Grace, she commented: this sentence makes no sense! NO, it didn’t because I didn’t complete it. I left off the subject of the sentence. I do this a lot, which is one of many reasons why I need an editor! Don’t laugh, you’ll need one too.
I remember getting so upset when my then social media coach read my completed manuscript for Faere Warrior: Passion’s Price and gave it back to me with a few comments. “Well, it doesn’t suck. Where is the rest of the story? The reader doesn’t know the world you have inside your head. You need to write it down, showing them everything else that is going on.”
I have loads of details inside my head of my characters, their worlds, the settings, their backstory, their pet peeves, quirks – but I sometimes am so anxious to get them down that I forget to write parts.
Sorry Grace, you’ve really got your work cut out for you! What issues do you have when writing your drafts?
You can catch the previous posts from this series here:
Write on my friends, write on!
Seems Tense switching is a very common thing. I will really get nailed on my WIP because I have a thing for incomplete sentences.