Feliz Navidad

Welcome to Flash Fest December!

I have some author friends who have joined me in this challenge, and are contributing to the prize baskets!

This week’s prize basket:

  • $10.00 Amazon gift card
  •  your choice of one of my ebooks
  • swag bag
  •  handcrafted quality jewelry!
  • ebook of Clockwork Nutcracker

This is how the prize giveaway will work:

Leave a comment throughout the week on any blog post, whether it’s the blog hop, flash, guest spot, or weekend writing warriors. I will select one of the commenters through Randompicker and post it on Monday’s post ( or rather Tuesday as it’s been lately, since my internet connection has been sketchy.) That person can contact me on Facebook or email me at: l.e.mcatee@gmail.com.

Winner for the week of December 17 thru December 23- Carol Gyzander!!!  Carol has deferred as an author in the giveaway, and our prize winner is: Cindy Webb!

The challenge is to write a flash piece, 500 to 1000 words based on a Holiday tune as a prompt. The author was given the option to select their own or I would assign one. Trust me,  my list of holiday tunage is anything but traditional!

Feliz Navidad by Jose Feliciano

Feliz Navidad

By Shellie Brown

Angie was looking forward to her session today with Mary but she was also a little nervous. Angie never asked the counselor to hypnotize her before and she was only doing this because she and George were finally beginning to connect again. She wanted to do something special but she was so shy that she couldn’t think of any other way to come up with the courage to give him the gift she wanted to give him.

So today at her therapy session she was going to be hypnotized and have the hypnotic suggestion planted that only on Christmas Eve and only when she heard a certain song, a certain Christmas Carol that was George’s favorite, Feliz Navidad. Which she never heard anywhere else except in her home that she would begin a slow sensual striptease for him.

That was where the misadventure began. The session went fine and she had almost forgotten about the hypnotic suggestion until they were wrapping presents on Christmas Eve for their son and they ran out of tape.

George asked her to run to the store quickly and grab another roll so that they could finish wrapping presents before he got up in the morning.

Angie walked into the store, the type of big-box store that was the only place still open on Christmas Eve after 8 p.m.  She started to wander back towards where the tape would be by where they kept all the school supplies and craft supplies, and then it happened.  Feliz Navidad came on over the intercom and she completely forgot why she was there.

Angie started to slowly and sensually dance and begin to take off her top. She was in the process of unzipping her skirt whenever security caught up with her and took her to the back which snapped her out of it because she could no longer hear the music in the security office.  Angie looked around bewildered and covered herself realizing she wasn’t wearing a shirt.

The security guard handed her her top and asked if she would please put it back on. He then asked if there was someone they could call to pick her up since she didn’t seem well.

They called her husband George, who arrived within ten minutes. She had to explain to him what had happened. At first he was shocked but, when she explained what she had been trying to do for him, he just laughed and kissed her and asked if she had gotten the tape.  When she said she didn’t think so, they walked back hand in hand and got the tape before driving home together.

They finished wrapping  Michael’s presents and put on Feliz Navidad so that she could give him his present. What Angie didn’t realize it that officially Christmas Eve is over at midnight and it was 12:32 a.m. when they turned on Feliz Navidad but it didn’t matter anymore, she had all the courage she needed.

Angie gave him a slow sensual striptease which led to the best Christmas gift either of them had ever had and a closeness that would last for all of the coming year.

About the author:

Shellie Brown

Shellie Brown born and raised in Marietta Georgia has lived all over the country including the DC area and New Orleans during the time of Katrina moved after Hurricane Katrina to the Northern Ohio area near Cleveland where she resides with her two very spoiled kitties and makes jewelry and write stories. She is owner and designer at Mysticware Jewelry.

Leave a comment and let Shellie know what you think!

Write on my friends, write on!


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